Preview the Beginning Pages of the Script!
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Birds eye view of the church and the rectory. The church is modern but holds come classical elements such as a steeple roof, stain glass windows, and a cross at the top of the steeple. The rectory looks like an office building; square and plain, but there is a porch complete with porch swing, and wheelchair access.
The view goes to out side the front of the rectory the curtains of a window are opened and it’s easy to see into the room. The priest is completely visible in a rocking chair in the middle of the room. His head is tilted back like he is sleeping and peaceful.
Caption: * SIGH *
Close up on the Priests peaceful face as his eyes open slightly.
Shot is from the back of the priest’s room he is laying conformably in his chair staring outside at the sunshine as he watches children play across the street on a playground.
Caption: THE WEATHER IS SO SUNNY OUT, YET THE CHILDREN BREATH OUT COUDS OF STEAM, AND THEIR MOTHERS SHIVER IN THEIR WINTER COATS
The shot is back outside of the rectory and is focused on a little girl chasing after a little boy with a stick. The priest is still mostly visible from his room.
Caption: IT’S LIKE A TRICK
A third child joins in with the other two. She has a ball. The children are all smiles and action.
Caption: MOTHER NATURE LIKES TO PLAY JUST LIKE THE CHILDREN.
The shot is of a middle-aged woman sitting on one of the benches by the playground reading a book. She is serious in the book.
Caption: SHE PLAYS BLINDLY
The shot is of the priest eyes looking intensely at the woman on the bench.
The woman looks up from her book and gives a smile.
Caption: WITHOUT REGRET
The shot is from the back of the priest’s room again he is waving to the lady on the park bench and she is waving back.
Caption: AND WITH THE MOST BEAUTIFUL SMILE I HAVE EVER SEEN.
Same shot as the last frame only there is a load bang in the background and the priest is all of a sudden discouraged.
Caption: DAMN IT…
Patrick is caring a plastic lunch tray with flowers on it in one hand; like a butler. He has a big smile on his face and is turned to the side as he shuts the door.
Patrick: LOOK WHAT I BROUGHT!
Caption: THIS STRAPPING YOUNG SMILING BIMBO IS PATRICK: MY SLEF PROCLAMED NURSE. HE IS A COMPLET IDIOT
The frame is a close up of the priest’s sarcastic eyes as Patrick happily walks towards him in the background.
Priest: SORRY BUT MY EYES SEEMS TO BE BUSSY LOOKING AT SOMETHING ELSE.
Caption: BUT DON’T GET ME WRONG PATRICK HAS A SPECIAL SKILL…
Patrick is setting the tray down by the priest. The priest continues to pretend to ignore him.
Caption: HE IS VERY LOYAL.
Patrick: I brought you lunch!
Priest: what is it?
Patrick: a sandwich.
Patrick pulls up the tray in-between him and the priest and sits down on the ottoman in front of the priest. The priest is forced to pay attention to Patrick.
Caption: SO LOYAL IN FACT THAT HE NEVER SEEMS TO LEAVE ME ALLONE. CONVINCED THAT I AM SENILE OR A CHILD; HE CONSTANTLY WATCHES OVER ME; SUFFOCATING ME WITH HIS GOOD NATURE.
Patrick: DID YOU HAVE A NAP TODAY?
Priest: WHY WOULD I NAP AT 12 NOON?
Patrick: ITS NOON ALREADY?
Priest: ISNT THAT THE REASON YOU BROUGHT ME LUNCH?
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