Preview the Beginning Pages of the Script!
End Of Revelations
PAGE 1
Panel 1
Birds eye view of the church and the rectory. The church is modern but holds come classical elements such as a steeple roof, stain glass windows, and a cross at the top of the steeple. The rectory looks like an office building; square and plain, but there is a porch complete with porch swing, and wheelchair access.
Panel 2
The view goes to out side the front of the rectory the curtains of a window are opened and it’s easy to see into the room. The priest is completely visible in a rocking chair in the middle of the room. His head is tilted back like he is sleeping and peaceful.
Caption: * SIGH *
Panel 3
Close up on the Priests peaceful face as his eyes open slightly.
Caption: BEAUTIFUL…
PAGE 2
Panel 1
Shot is from the back of the priest’s room he is laying conformably in his chair staring outside at the sunshine as he watches children play across the street on a playground.
Caption: THE WEATHER IS SO SUNNY OUT, YET THE CHILDREN BREATH OUT COUDS OF STEAM, AND THEIR MOTHERS SHIVER IN THEIR WINTER COATS
Panel 2
The shot is back outside of the rectory and is focused on a little girl chasing after a little boy with a stick. The priest is still mostly visible from his room.
Caption: IT’S LIKE A TRICK
Panel 3
A third child joins in with the other two. She has a ball. The children are all smiles and action.
Caption: MOTHER NATURE LIKES TO PLAY JUST LIKE THE CHILDREN.
Panel 4
The shot is of a middle-aged woman sitting on one of the benches by the playground reading a book. She is serious in the book.
Caption: SHE PLAYS BLINDLY
Panel 5
The shot is of the priest eyes looking intensely at the woman on the bench.
Caption: HAPPILY
Panel 6
The woman looks up from her book and gives a smile.
Caption: WITHOUT REGRET
Panel 7
The shot is from the back of the priest’s room again he is waving to the lady on the park bench and she is waving back.
Caption: AND WITH THE MOST BEAUTIFUL SMILE I HAVE EVER SEEN.
PAGE 3
Panel 1
Same shot as the last frame only there is a load bang in the background and the priest is all of a sudden discouraged.
SFX: BANG!
Caption: DAMN IT…
Panel 2
Patrick is caring a plastic lunch tray with flowers on it in one hand; like a butler. He has a big smile on his face and is turned to the side as he shuts the door.
Patrick: LOOK WHAT I BROUGHT!
Caption: THIS STRAPPING YOUNG SMILING BIMBO IS PATRICK: MY SLEF PROCLAMED NURSE. HE IS A COMPLET IDIOT
Panel 3
The frame is a close up of the priest’s sarcastic eyes as Patrick happily walks towards him in the background.
Priest: SORRY BUT MY EYES SEEMS TO BE BUSSY LOOKING AT SOMETHING ELSE.
Caption: BUT DON’T GET ME WRONG PATRICK HAS A SPECIAL SKILL…
Panel 4
Patrick is setting the tray down by the priest. The priest continues to pretend to ignore him.
Caption: HE IS VERY LOYAL.
Patrick: I brought you lunch!
Priest: what is it?
Patrick: a sandwich.
Panel 5
Patrick pulls up the tray in-between him and the priest and sits down on the ottoman in front of the priest. The priest is forced to pay attention to Patrick.
Caption: SO LOYAL IN FACT THAT HE NEVER SEEMS TO LEAVE ME ALLONE. CONVINCED THAT I AM SENILE OR A CHILD; HE CONSTANTLY WATCHES OVER ME; SUFFOCATING ME WITH HIS GOOD NATURE.
Patrick: DID YOU HAVE A NAP TODAY?
Priest: WHY WOULD I NAP AT 12 NOON?
Patrick: ITS NOON ALREADY?
Priest: ISNT THAT THE REASON YOU BROUGHT ME LUNCH?
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